Audio Lesson - Let's make an audio commercial!

It's been a while since I have used Audacity software, but it eventually came back to me. I was trying to think of something to do for the audio lesson assignment and I was drawing a blank. On my drive home after class, with the music cranked and stuck in bumper to bumper traffic it suddenly came to me. A commercial for a fictional product!

This is what I came up with:
Lesson material:
 
 Audio Rubric:
 
 Sample commercial:

Enjoy and feel free to add your thoughts in the comment section.